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Canadian_Girl Advanced iMesh Chatter


Joined: Apr 28, 2005 Posts: 142
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Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 8:12 pm Post subject: I feel like getting trashed by PICA.... |
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...a sure way to do that, is to write a poem!
Love or Desire?
Why is love not synonymous with desire?
How can one love you but not want you?
I can't see how passion can be felt
so differently by two people in love.
What is a raging inferno for one
equals to mere match light for the other.
How does one live only feeling the match light?
All the while yearning for the blazing heat?
We marry for true love and companionship,
intrigued by the promise of perpetual desire.
But as all pretenses are soon to fall away,
we find how mismatched our passions can be.
What does one to do with the constant yearning?
How does this one get what their soul needs?
just go on, existing….
Impulses & intensity rarely reciprocated.
Simple words are impossibly deficient in defining
the pain of rejection or solving the problem.
What of other souls who burn as deeply as you?
When two yearning souls touch and find bliss?
Passion flares, romance and understanding flow,
transferred in each touch like electricity.
Inhibitions and past rejections are burnt away,
and euphoria blinds senses of right and wrong.
Why is desire not synonymous with love?
How can one want you but not love you?
Even while in the throws of passion
one can assume an implied commitment.
But when it comes to rearranging one's life
to make desire legitimate, it's fascade fades.
This leads me to believe of love or desire-
the only real state of feeling is YEARNING.
And I don’t think it ever ends.
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Mad_Bomber Semi Advanced Spammer


Joined: Mar 15, 2007 Posts: 397 Location: Ban-Town, England
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Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 8:19 pm Post subject: Re: I feel like getting trashed by PICA.... |
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Seeing as you specifically requested pica do the work on this one... I'll leave it alone.
_________________ Your life is lost, your soul is damned,
But it feels too good to make a stand.
Bad is bad, but this is worse.
Let judgment come, you love this curse! |
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Canadian_Girl Advanced iMesh Chatter


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Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 8:23 pm Post subject: Re: I feel like getting trashed by PICA.... |
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hey, feel free...do your worst...Im not scared of you!! lol
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Mad_Bomber Semi Advanced Spammer


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Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 8:31 pm Post subject: Re: I feel like getting trashed by PICA.... |
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It doesn't matter if your scared of me or not.
You shouldn't be scared of me anyway.
I can't do the work on this 'poem' anyway, it's TL;DR.
_________________ Your life is lost, your soul is damned,
But it feels too good to make a stand.
Bad is bad, but this is worse.
Let judgment come, you love this curse! |
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picafite Spammer


Joined: Dec 01, 2006 Posts: 257
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Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 3:57 pm Post subject: Re: I feel like getting trashed by PICA.... |
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What a wonderful poem...
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Mad_Bomber Semi Advanced Spammer


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Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 4:14 pm Post subject: Re: I feel like getting trashed by PICA.... |
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yes, its very emotive and obviously came from the heart... much better than those other amateurish poems that get posted on this website.
_________________ Your life is lost, your soul is damned,
But it feels too good to make a stand.
Bad is bad, but this is worse.
Let judgment come, you love this curse! |
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Canadian_Girl Advanced iMesh Chatter


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Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 5:36 pm Post subject: Re: I feel like getting trashed by PICA.... |
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that must be sarcasm....if not, I just dont GET you guys somtimes....
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tigernate2 Super Spammer


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Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 5:37 pm Post subject: Re: I feel like getting trashed by PICA.... |
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its a good poem, and not too long to read mr alick. 
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Mad_Bomber Semi Advanced Spammer


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Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 5:52 pm Post subject: Re: I feel like getting trashed by PICA.... |
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LOL! Ohhh ISN'T THE WORLD A BEAUTIFUL PLACE?!
*skips away merrily*
_________________ Your life is lost, your soul is damned,
But it feels too good to make a stand.
Bad is bad, but this is worse.
Let judgment come, you love this curse! |
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picafite Spammer


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Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 6:59 pm Post subject: Re: I feel like getting trashed by PICA.... |
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It is so feeling and full of life. It makes me feel like shiat and wants me to end my life.
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